Hey there, World!
I know I said that I'll be posting my Prologue for my story, but I did my research about writing stories in blogs. After reading some articles, I got a bit discouraged by it. But don't worry, I'll still write the story that I have in mind and maybe someday I will post it here.
So, for now I'll be cancelling my plans on writing the story. I know I said that I'll post it but I didn't so my apologies for not keeping my word. In the mean time, I would like to share a story that I made years ago. It's quite long but I hope it doesn't bore you. I found it in my Facebook notes and when I read it, wasn't that cringe-worthy that I thought (only at the ending.) Also, the notes that I added at the top were just 2011 me talking. So, this is a sample of my story writing. Though it is from years ago, my writing right now maybe different from back then.
I hope you enjoyed reading, and I'll write again soon. :)
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Note: I hate the ending! It's corny! I just couldn't think of a better ending...
Note#2: It's very long... so... just go with it!
There were once two childhood friends, a boy and a girl. The boy’s name was Ethan and the girl’s name was Hazel. They are both like brother and sister because both of them are only child in the family and they’re usually together. Ethan is only months older than Hazel but they’re in the same year level and they don’t care about who’s older or younger. Ethan always teases Hazel about everything she does and she always gives him a hit on the head.
At first, on their middle school years, Ethan has a crush on Hazel, but he didn’t realize that that crush grew to liking her when they entered high school. And now they are in junior year and it grew even bigger.
It was lunch time, and Ethan and Hazel, along with their other friends, ate lunch together. Ethan couldn’t stop looking at Hazel and he’s always spacing out all the time. His friend, Chris, noticed this. “Hey, looking at your lover I see.” Chris said. “Shh!! Shut up! They might hear!” Ethan said as he covered Chris’ mouth. Chris is the only person that knew that Ethan likes Hazel; even his mom knows that he likes Hazel. “Well, when are you gonna tell you-know-who that you like her?” Chris said. Ethan kept on eating and didn’t say a word. Chris sighed and said, “You better tell her that you like her, and besides, didn’t she tell you that she likes someone else?” Ethan still didn’t speak and kept on eating. He had gotten more depressed that Chris mentioned about Hazel liking someone else.
It was the afternoon, and Hazel and Ethan we’re walking home together. They’ve been like this since freshman year. It’s what they do every day after school. They bought some ice cream just to satisfy their hunger. Then as they we’re walking, Hazel’s ice cream fell. Ethan chuckled, “Ha ha! Your ice cream fell and mine’s still stable!” he said and sticks his tongue out at Hazel. She hit him on the back of the head “Ugh! You’re such a kid!” she said, and his nose hit on his ice cream. Hazel laughed a little, “Ha ha ha! You have ice cream on your nose!” she said as she pointed on his nose. “Oh great, it’s ruined! It’s all your fault!” Ethan said. “My fault? If you didn’t tease me then it wouldn’t be ruined.” Hazel said. Ethan didn’t say a word and wiped of his nose. “Aw…” Hazel said “I was supposed to take a picture of you having ice cream on your nose” Ethan looked at her, “Huh? Why?” he asked. Hazel smiled and said, “Because you looked so cute with it!” Ethan blushed even that he knows that she meant that in a friendly way. Ethan started to space out and looked at her for a while and he can hear his heart beating fast. Hazel noticed this and she pinched his cheeks. “Ow! What did you do that for?” Ethan said. “You were spacing out again!” Hazel said. “Oh… sorry…” Ethan said. “Man, you’ve been like that since freshman year.” She said. Ethan didn’t say a word he just bowed his head.
Then suddenly, Hazel saw somebody, “Oh my!” she said. “What? What’s wrong?” Ethan asked. “Look! It’s him! It’s Mike! The guy that I like! The one that I told you about!” Hazel said. Ethan looked and he saw the guy then he got a little jealous. “…Hey, isn’t that the guy from the other section?” Ethan said. “Yeah, but I notice him everyday cause he’s so cool and so cute!” Hazel said. She was blushing and she couldn’t stop smiling when she saw Mike. “So… want me to call him?” Ethan said. Hazel got shocked, “Really? You’ll do that?” She asked “Of course! Anything for you…” Ethan said. Hazel blushed a little when he said that. “HEY MIKE! COME OVER HERE!” Ethan yelled. Hazel got shocked again, “HUH?! I thought that you’re gonna call him?!” Hazel said.
“I am calling him… HEY YOU! GET OVER HERE!” Ethan said
“I-I thought that you’re gonna call him on the phone!”
“Oh… that what you thought…? Uh… hmm… …Oh well, HEY! C’MON! MY FRIEND HERE WANTS TO TALK TO YOU!”
Hazel hit Ethan on the head again, “You idiot!” she said. “Ow… that hurts… and that’s not because you hit me…” he said. Then Mike came, “Hey, what’s with the big idea? Why did you call me?” Mike said. “Well… uh…” Hazel said. She could barely talk because she’s talking to Mike. “She wants to ask you out on a date.” Ethan suddenly said. Hazel looked at Ethan. “Oh, is that so? Heh… well… since that you’re cute… sure, I’ll go out with you.” Mike said with a smile. Ethan got shocked that Mike accepted the invitation and at the same time, he felt hurt and jealousy and he tries not to show it. “Let’s meet at the Town Plaza. Saturday, 3 pm.” Mike said and then he left. As soon that he left, Hazel couldn’t stop smiling. And Ethan notices this, “Can you wipe off that dorky grin of yours? You’re starting to look stupid…” he said and he got hit on the head again just because of that, “But aren’t you happy that I finally gonna have a date with him! For two years I have waited for this day to happen and its all thanks to you! You’re the best, best friend that I ever have!” Hazel said with a grin. Ethan still felt jealous even that he set them up on a date.
Ethan told about it to Chris, “What?! You set them up on a date?! Why would you do that?! I thought you like Hazel?!” Chris scolded to Ethan. “I do like her!” Ethan said, still feeling regret for what he did. Chris sighed, “Then stop their date, ruin it!” He said. “I can’t do that! If I do that, Hazel will hate me and will never speak to me again! I just want her to be happy… so I’m letting her date that Mike guy… Damn it… this is such a pain…” Ethan said. Chris patted Ethan’s back, “It’s alright man, maybe the date won’t go well.” He said. Ethan sighed and said, “I wish…”
Monday, another school day. Hazel was walking at the halls with a big smile on her face. She approached to Ethan. “So… how’s the date with Mike?” he asked. Hazel’s smile turned into a grin, “It was great! Me and Mike had fun! I am so happy right now! And he said that we can have a second date! Thanks again Ethan!” she said then she hugged Ethan. He was getting worried that Mike and Hazel will officially end up together and she won’t let Mike go. He’s feeling awfully depressed. Hazel looked at him, “Hey! What’s with the long face?” she asked. “Nothing… it’s just that… if you ever end up with Mike… you might forget me… you might forget our Saturday night hangouts…” he said. Hazel smiled, “Aw, don’t worry! I won’t forget all about that! Especially you, you’re my best friend! Don’t worry, we’ll still have our Saturday night hangouts, I promise!” she said.
Ethan said it again to Chris about Hazel’s date. “I told you that it’s gonna end up in a good date!” Chris said. “What? You never said anything like that! You only said, ‘Maybe it won’t go well’!” Ethan said as he was eating his lunch. “Even so… what are you going to do? I mean I’m sure on that second date, they’ll end up holding hands, or cuddling, or maybe even kiss.” Chris said. “Shut up! Are you trying to make me feel even worse?” Ethan said. “Sorry man, I’m just looking at the possibilities.” Chris said. Ethan didn’t say a word.
At the afternoon, Ethan and Chris went to the mall just for a while. Then Chris spotted Mike with his friends. “Hey, look its Mike.” Chris said to Ethan. “Huh, where?” Ethan asked. Chris pointed where Mike was. Ethan looked at Mike and thought of Hazel. “…Wait here, I’ll just go talk to him.” Ethan said and approached to Mike. “Hey, Mike…” Ethan said. Mike looked at Ethan, “Oh, hey, it’s you! What’s up?” he said. “Uh… can we talk privately?” Ethan said and he left. Mike followed Ethan.
“So… what is it?” Mike asked to Ethan.
“It’s about Hazel… she… told me something…” Ethan said.
“Okay, what?”
“She said… she said that she doesn’t want to have a second date with you.”
“What? But why?”
“She… uh… she doesn’t really like you… she thought she did but after the date she suddenly doesn’t like you.”
“Oh… too bad…”
“I’m sorry.”
“It’s okay. I guess I’ll have to cancel our date.”
After that, Ethan went back to Chris. “Oh, hey, what did you tell him?” Chris asked. “I told him… I told him that Hazel didn’t like him.” Ethan said. “What?! You lied to him that Hazel didn’t like him?!” Chris blurted. Ethan nodded. “Man… You’ll be dead when Hazel finds out about this.” Chris said. Ethan didn’t say anything.
One night, Hazel went to Ethan’s house and she knocked on the door. Ethan’s mom answered the door. “Oh, hello Hazel.” Ethan’s mother said. “Hi Auntie, I’m just gonna go talk to Ethan for a sec.” Hazel said. “Oh, okay, please come in.” Ethan’s mother said.
“No, it’s okay, I’ll just talk to him here outside, it’ll only take a while anyway.” Hazel said. Ethan’s mother called him and Ethan went down stairs. He saw Hazel and he has a bad feeling. He then went outside to talk to her. “Hey Hazel, what’s up?” and right after he said that, Hazel suddenly slapped him on the face. “Why the hell did you do that for?!” Ethan yelled. Then Hazel looked at Ethan with her tearful eyes. “Because! You ruined it! You ruined it!” Hazel cried.
“Ruined what?” Ethan said.
“My date with Mike! “
Ethan didn’t speak he just bowed his head a little.
“He cancelled it because he thought that I don’t like him… and it’s because you told him that lie!”
“…”
“Why… why did you told him that?! You’re the one who helped me to get a date with him, but you’re the one who ruined it! You know that I like him!”
“…Hazel…”
“I just don’t understand…” Hazel’s tears continue to drop one by one. Ethan doesn’t like seeing Hazel cry. “… You’re right! I did tell him that lie!” Ethan yelled. “Then why… why did you tell him that?” Ethan didn’t speak he turned his head a little. “I’m sorry… I can’t…” Ethan said. Hazel looked at Ethan firmly, “Ethan, you have to tell me, so we can never fight like this again. I don’t like fighting with you…” Hazel said. Ethan shook his head, “I’m sorry, I’m still not gonna tell you.” He said. Hazel became furious, “Then fine! Be that way!” she yelled and left with tears on her eyes. Ethan became furious too. Not to Hazel but to himself. Ethan entered the house with his head down. He saw his mother right in front of him. “Honey, are you alright?” his mom said. “I’m alright mom…” Ethan said trying to hide his frustration. “Are you sure?” his mom said. “I said I’m alright!” Ethan yelled. His mom was surprised, as so did he, “…I’m sorry mom…” he said with his voice low. “It’s alright… …It’s hard to have a fight with someone… especially with the one you love.” His mother said. Ethan became quiet and thought that she’s right, it is hard. He went upstairs, lied on his bed and thought about the fight he had with Hazel.
The next day, Ethan approach to Mike again and they talked privately. “So, what do you want?” Mike asked.
“I want you to have a date with Hazel again.” Ethan said directly.
“What? I thought you said that she doesn’t like me?”
“I did… I lied.”
“Oh… then… why did you lie to me?”
“…”
“You like her, don’t you?”
“!!! … How did you know…?”
“It’s pretty obvious that that was the reason why you lied to me.”
“… Please, just have a date with her already. I’m tired of her ignoring me like a stranger…”
“…Okay, in one condition…”
“What?”
“You stay away from her.”
“What?!” Ethan said and he grabbed Mike’s shirt, “Why would I stay away from her? She’s my best friend!”
“Fine! If you don’t want to see her happy again!” Mike said. Ethan calmed down and he let go of his shirt. It’s a sign that he accepted the deal on avoiding Hazel.
At that night, Ethan’s cell phone rang he picked it up and it was Hazel. “Ethan! Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!” Hazel said. “Huh? For what?” Ethan asked.
“For telling Mike the truth! And now he asked me out on a date!”
“Oh, well, I just wanted you to be happy.”
“Oh I am! Thank you so much! You really are the best, best friend ever!”
“…It’s a good thing that you called… I’m getting pretty lonely here.”
“Oh, should I go over there?”
“No, no need. I’m gonna go to sleep anyway.”
“Okay… good night.”
“Good night” Then Ethan hung up he felt sad that he talked to Hazel for the very last time and it was on the phone too.
Since that night, Hazel has been dating Mike again. And soon after that, they already became boyfriend and
girlfriend. But Hazel hasn’t told it to Ethan yet because she hasn’t talked to him since they talked on the phone one other night. She tried calling him, but he didn’t answer his phone, he just let it ring. She tried calling him again and again until she texted him. As he opens the message, it reads, “Hey, Ethan guess what? Me and Mike are boyfriend and girlfriend now! I’m so happy! Hey, why didn’t you answer your phone? I was trying to call you for like a hundred times already.” And after Ethan read the message, he didn’t reply to her. Then at school, Hazel hasn’t been with Ethan for a while since she’s always with Mike all the time. Ethan always looks at Hazel at a distance, watching her talk to her guy. And when Hazel caught him looking at her, she waves at him, but he doesn’t wave back. He just smiles at her and walks away. Hazel was getting worried for Ethan and she wants to talk to him about it.
Saturday night, the same night when Hazel and Ethan used to hangout together. She knocks on the door, and Ethan’s mother answered the door again. “Oh, hello there Hazel. I haven’t seen you for a while.” Ethan’s mother said. “You too… uhm… can I talk to Ethan? But don’t call him; I’ll just go to his room.” Hazel said. Ethan’s mother let her in and she went upstairs and to his room. She knocked on the door. “Mom… I’m not in the mood to talk right now.” Ethan whined. He heard another knock. “Mom, please, not right now…” He said. He still hears the knocks. He got frustrated and he suddenly opened the door and he saw Hazel’s face. His heart pounded as soon he saw her. “H-Hazel… what are you doing here?” Ethan asked. “…I want to talk to you.” Hazel answered. Ethan let her in and closed the door. Ethan sat down on the bed and so did Hazel but they keep their distance from each other. “Ethan… I wanna ask you something…” Hazel said
“Okay, what?” Ethan said.
“…Since you… asked Mike to date me again, we haven’t been talking or been hanging out together like we always do. And I wanna ask… are you ignoring me?”
“… …”
“I mean, you haven’t been calling me or you never answer your phone whenever I call. You barely look at me when I look at you. What’s going on? Why are you acting this way?”
“… If I tell you the reason… you won’t be happy about it.”
“Ethan please, just tell me.”
Ethan stood up and folded his arms and took a few steps forward, “I just… I just can’t…” he said. Hazel stood up too, “Please Ethan, tell me… …I miss you… I miss you when you’re not with me…” she said. Ethan blushed when he heard that. He unfolded his arms and turned around to look at Hazel. He wants to tell her the reason why he’s acting like this, but if he does, Hazel won’t be happy, and break up with the guy she liked. But then, he realized, he likes Hazel too. In fact, he has learned to love her and he wants to be with her. “…Alright… …Before you and Mike dated again, we made a deal…” he said. Hazel listens every word that he says. “For you to date with Mike again, I have to… I have to stay away from you.” He continued. Hazel was shocked for what she heard. She bowed her head a little. “I have to do it so I can see you smile again, and you won’t get mad at me…” Ethan said. He saw a tear fell from Hazel’s face. He hugged her just to comfort her. “I’m sorry…” he whispered. “I knew that you won’t be happy when you know this.” Hazel looked at Ethan with her tearful eyes, “No… I’M sorry… if I weren’t so selfish… then… I would still be with you by now.” She said. Ethan just looked at her and he lets go of Hazel. He wiped off a tear from her face. Then Hazel wiped her own tears and she was going to leave. “Hey, where are you going?” Ethan asked. Hazel turned around and looked at him firmly; “I’m going to get things done!” she said and left the room.
Ethan started his Monday as a peaceful day. But then, he found himself tackled by some guy. People turned their heads and saw what was happening. Ethan looked up and it was Mike. He was beating Ethan nonstop like a maniac. “Stop! What are you doing, why the hell are you beating me up?!” Ethan yelled. “Because you broke us up!” Mike yelled and continued punching him. “We broke up because she knew about our deal! Why did you tell her?!”
“She asked about it! I just couldn’t help but tell her! I-I’m sorry!” Ethan yelled.
“Sorry is not enough!” Mike yelled. He was going to punch him on the face, really hard, “STOP!!!” but he got interrupted. Hazel pulled Mike away from Ethan and she protected him. “Hazel!” Ethan said. “Hazel… …get out of the way! I’m not finished with that guy yet! Mike said. Hazel shook her head, “No!” she said.
“What?”
“I said no! I won’t let you hurt Ethan again!”
“But… but he broke us up!”
“Shut up! He didn’t break us up… I did! And if you’re not happy about it, then hit me on the face too!” Hazel yelled. Mike didn’t move he just looked at her. He put down his fist and bowed his head, “…I can’t… I can’t do that to you…” Mike said. Hazel picked Ethan up and said, “Then leave us alone…” she took Ethan with her and left Mike with the crowd. Mike just looked at them go. He felt regret and sadness. He then realized that he has feelings for Hazel.
Hazel took Ethan to the infirmary to treat his wounds on his face. As she was treating him, he was looking at Hazel and his heart was pounding. Hazel suddenly cried, “!! Why are you crying?” Ethan asked. Hazel wiped of her tears, “I’m sorry… if… if I only knew that guy’s personality towards you, then this wouldn’t happen… I’m sorry… I’m really sorry…” Hazel said. Her tears keep on running down her face. “Its… it’s not your fault, it’s mine… if I didn’t ruin your date, then this wouldn’t even happen.” Ethan said. “No, it’s really my fault… if I weren’t so selfish then you won’t get beaten up like this.” Hazel said. “But still… it really is my fault…” Ethan said.
“No, it’s mine.” Hazel said
“It’s mine.”
“I said it’s my fault!”
“It’s not your fault! It’s mine!”
“…”
“…”
After they argued, they laughed because they we’re arguing about who’s fault is it. Then it became quiet. Ethan looked at Hazel and his heart was pounding, he’s feeling nervous all of a sudden. “Hazel… I…” Hazel suddenly hugged Ethan just before he finishes his sentence. Ethan blushed, “…Hazel?”
“…Ethan… you’re very important to me… and I don’t want to be separated from you… you’re very special to me…” Hazel said and she was blushing. Ethan also blushed when he heard that. “Ethan… … I love you…” Hazel whispered. Ethan’s heart raced and he hugged Hazel. “Hazel… I love you too… I loved you for a long time now… but I didn’t have the courage to say it to you until now…” Ethan said.
Then after that, everything came back to normal, except that they are now a couple. They’re back on their own ways, but much sweeter than before.